Torn Away - Comments

Alrighty

@Savanna horan

Okay, sorry. I'll take your comment into consideration when writing the following chapters.

I like it just it's confusing

@Savanna horan
Oh, well I'm sorry you didn't like it, but I think it was well written.

Well the third chapter and on

@Savanna horan
The Third Chapter Had None Of That In It.

In the third chapter I was beyond confused like Zayn helps her out througha vent and harry did something and then mom was there and then you started to talked about the girls sisters. I'm lost!??

@Savanna horan
How is it confusing, exactly?

This is confusing

So basically... it's got a good plot but it's too short.... make it longer so it keeps readers interested... I feel rude by criticizing it.... it truly is good though!

@Jenni HNLZL
kk working on it now

great story please update asap :)

@Zaynslivingdoll
no prob other than that great story !!!! :D update asap Please

@Direction Girl
Absolutely! Thank you so much for your opinion
<3- Kiki

just one complaint.......
can you make the chapters longer

im the writer sorry for such a short chapter my laptop was going dead the next chapter will be better i promise so plz subscribe