Hunger Games (1D Version) - Comments

Not trying to be rude but the first chapter was a little rushed... Just saying

@Sameria Peppermint
I didn't mean for it to come of rude. I don't want you to stop reading the story if it sounded like it. It didn't seem as good in comments as it did in my head :( Sorry

@Beannie
I wasn't trying to hate. I was giving a tip , I didn't know you wanted to use 'not " . . . my bad. I won't won't read your story since you said you don't want me to.

@Sameria Peppermint
We try and I use ' not " Your opinion is your opinion don't stop reading :).

Good idea , but events happened way too fast.And try quotation marks when each character speaks.