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Could you please review my story, Pour Tourjours? You said we had to re-say if we wanted it reviewed, so here I am :D

warmachinerox1
5/2/14

Can you review my new story please ? Its called Beauty Under The Sea . Its my least popular story with a 9.9 rating and all my other stories have 10.0 . I know that sounds bratty but ... can you maybe review it and tell me why ?

NiallsNandos
4/30/14

can you review my story? it's called The Boy Next Door

ELLINAD @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
4/27/14

I'd like to start off with apologizing for any spelling errors in this, I'm on my phone and will probably not catch some type-o's.

Anyway, I think the idea of the reviews and things to avoid is a good idea for writers; however, it sounds like you have a lot to learn about writing yourself. I'm not sure how long ago you posted the "dumb fan-fic moments" but a lot of the things you have labeled as "dumb" really aren't and what is "dumb" is your reasonings. Sorry if that sounds harsh, but it's true.

A lot of the things you found dumb are really basic writing techniques. Like painting a picture. For example, you don't/didn't like when people use/d "growled" however using "growled" is a way to describe the way in which a character said something or the type of noise that came out which corresponds with the scene. Using the same words over and over again gets old and boring, quickly. Also, you didn't like when people used the word "core". Core is another term for vagina, like "pussy", "cookie", "snatch", "vijay", etc. Some people are used to using a certain "nickname" than others or it's about their comfort using certain words. There were other things as well however I cannot think of them now, and as said I'm on my phone (which is about to die) so it's not easy to go back and look. Perhaps your views have changed since writing those, perhaps not, just wanted to give you the perspective of another.

As said earlier, I think the general idea of this is good. It's.a good idea for writers to know what they're doing good or bad. I myself get frustrated and stop reading stories for poor grammar/punctuation, boring plot, etc.

ShanShay
4/26/14

Can you review my story? It's called Eyes Open. Please?

Harry_Louis_Niall_Liam_Zayn
4/24/14

I can be a Co-A :) I'm almost 17 and I prefer to get on this site to write, not fight. I've been told I'm a very blunt person and I'm on at least twice a day. I know this site like the back of my hand and no matter how much someone irritates me, I can be civil to anyone for the sake of business. :)

Kay_Baby
4/24/14

@UniqueMOFO
I can take it, everyone has their own view or things. Thank you for being honest and really keep it I'm not butt hurt about it. And also I will start making some changes to my story to improve it more.

Loveit
4/24/14

could you review my story 'I Will Wait', please? That would be lovely.
And good luck searching a Co-A!

musiclover17
4/24/14

Can you review my story 'Arranged Marriage'? please. thanks :)

shootingstar98
4/24/14

You Must be on regularly and actively: Yes I am

You have to be 16+: I'm 19

You cannot be afraid to give you honest opinion: I'm never afraid to give my honest opinion

You can reply to all/most of the comments: Well, Most if you want me too

You mus'nt fight/get angry with me, along with argue: I will never argue with you

If I have to quit this site for a reason, will you be able to take action into doing this all on your own?: Yes, i can. Im trustworthy

If a person needs help, do you know enough about this site to help them?: Yes, I do

Can you be nice to the people you hate and not be mean?: I can totally do that