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Great story!!!

(Not aimed) I get bullies because I have not enough detail then I Get bullied when I add to much I have told you this is my first fan fiction so be nice cant you understand that yes I can take on criticism but when I take it on board change the whole story then you go and say I need to calm Down on the detail

oh I give up

some chapters are short and some are long I did that for more affect but if them longer I will take your information onto account for my next fan fiction



@proud_directioner

*boner*. And not to be mean or anything, but why are you always talking about Harrys dick? I mean if you kiss someone on the neck once, it gives them a boner? Oh-kayyyy?

ur chapters are way too short

@yazzy1998
Are you liking it so far

@yazzy1998
I have updated for you all xx

@Asha_styles anytime love :) UPDATTTEEEEEE NOWWW !!

@yazzy1998 thanks x

Okay :) haha love harrys character here

this is my first one and was doing them last night when I was tired so I will try and make them longer x

The chapters are too short make them longer with alot of detail...

There is more now x

Its too short /: