Never In A Million Years - Comments

Thank you so much everyone who has read this story I luv every single one of ya

@louisgirlfriend
#Facts.

@Cece_Smilez
Haha yeah but talents we try

when Im writing things that happens to me too. so i never have a solid plan.

@Cece_Smilez
Thanks. It was originally supposed to be about Harry and his family but I just couldn't stick to that one thing

not bad. its a sad story but a nice one

Okay thanks I also thought it was to. I mean didn't mean for things to happen that quickly but thanks for reading

It jumped forward in time too quickly, and I'm going to repeat what I said before about the grammar. (Punctuation, spelling, just normal, English class things).

This chapter kinda made me cry a bit my self...

No problem! I hope you continue to gather viewers!!!

@PickNandos
oh okay thanks for being honest and helping me ever sence you started i have been geting a whole lot more veiwers thank you so much !

I'm slightly confused. It still is missing a lot of basic English class stuff.

-punctuation
-spelling
-paragraphs
-and maybe some magic dust. You can get some at Disney world.

Im not saying it's bad exactly, it just really needs a lot of work. Like, hours, days, weeks...

@PickNandos
sorry to bother you but can you please tell me wut you think about my second chapter you seem to be the only person who would tell me wuts wrong with it.
thankyou<3

So much better! Still a few more things that could be changed, but this is totally a few steps up

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please tell me wut u think