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@irishdimples
Thank you so much. And if you have any ideas I am completely open to them. I greatly appreciate your interest in my story.
@Look_its_rosalynn_22
I will!!! I'm more experienced with girl fights so planning out the next scene will take a little time.
I will!!! I'm more experienced with girl fights so planning out the next scene will take a little time.
It's a great entrance it brings in the reader! Make sure every thing is capitalized though and your spacing is good. I liked it :) rate: 9-10
noooooo dont delet please
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