Moonshine - Comments

Cool story bro, tell it again

Geez, again. You've done it again. The tingles in my chest are swelling.

You're really good at this. So beautiful in the charcters developed. I just really love your work. It's really poetic in my eyes.

Your a great writer! Even though my imaginary boyfriend is dead! I hope U do more :)

I WANT TO TURN THESE INTO LONG AND LOVELY AND TRAGIC STORIES BECAUSE THEY ARE SO BEAUTIFUL

DON'T YOU DARE DELETE ANY OF THESE LOVELY FANFICS. IF YOU DO, I'LL BE FORCED TO GO TO YOUR HOUSE AND MAKE YOU DO SCHOOLWORK.

This was really melancholic, and even though it had a brief explanation of what was going on, I thought it was brilliant how you left the ending for the reader to kind of wonder. Awesome details, like always, and in such a short amount of words, you've developed your version of Louis' character fully. I just love your writing style because it's open to thoughts that explores the scenery and your character more. THERE. I EXPLAINED IN DETAIL WHAT I LOVE ABOUT THIS, AND THIS IS WHY YOU'RE A VERY VERY AWESOME WRITER, ESPECIALLY FOR SOMEONE YOUR AGE.