Just Like My Brother ( Louis Tomlinson fanfic ) - Comments

@ManyShadesOfBlack
yeah

@Louis_Tomlinson_fan
Oh ok but you're telling them what's right and they still get mad about that?

@ManyShadesOfBlack
most people do when correct theyre mistakes just cuz they dont like to be wrong

@Louis_Tomlinson_fan
lol it's cool love..... u can message me about the mistakes i made so we can talk it out and fix it. why would u think I would call u a bitch?

@ManyShadesOfBlack
ok, and thank u for not calling me a bitch for correcting you.

@Louis_Tomlinson_fan
Ok thanks for correcting me about ages and dates. u message me on what i need to fix so I can fix the problem.

I'm sorry, but the dates and ages don't match up at all. If she was 5 when he left, but she was 3 when he graduated from middle school, then he would be 15 or 16 when he went on x factor.Also, if he's suppose to be like 22, then that would mean that he was only gone for 5- 6 years, not 10. there is more, but I'm not going to get too into this. I think you might want to fix it though. Sorry if I sounded mean, I didn't mean to, I just thought you should know so you could fix it.