boys before flowers (one direction fan fiction ) - Comments

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@diaspro16
No problem, its a great start :) I cant wait for the next update!!

@Scarlett
thanks scarlet for saying <3 Im glad you liked it :))))))

Really nice start so far, I would have loved it to be longer though ;)
Only one thing i would suggest (Im not trying to criticize) would be to have capital letters. Purely because it makes it easier to read and looks better. Im honestly just tyring to help x
Anyway I cannot wait for the next chapter this is gonna be a really nice story! :)