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It's great, but just one tip: You may want to work a little on your grammar/punctuation and stuff. I'm just bothered if authors don't have correct grammar. It's probably just me, but I hope you fix because I absolutely CANNOT read a story with incorrect grammar! It bothers me! Other than that it's great. Keep it up I'm excited for the next chapter :)
That was long. Lol.
That was long. Lol.
Lol ok ill try my best then :)
9/12/13