Visions Of Us - Comments

I love your story so far. But I think you should add more detail to it.

@Rose majzoub
Thank you sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much!(:

I love it soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much!!!!!!!!

@Liana Stypayhorlikson.
Thanks!

Love it ! You are an amazing author!

@Liana Stypayhorlikson.
Hahaha Yes!

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@Full Luna
Thanks Alot & I Didn't Do Paragraphs Because I Knew I'd Mess Them Up Some How Hahaha. Would You Ever Consider Creating A FanFic With Me? If So Message Me!(:

I haven't read all the chapters yet but it's interesting. It's kind of hard to understand when more than one person is talking. Maybe try using paragraphs. Remember middle school where you English teacher harped on about, "When someone speaks go to a new line." ? Well even though I hated English class it does help readers understand. You have the potential for a great story here! I'm interested in it! :)

Thanks. Make Sure To Get This Out To Other People Please. It Would Mean The World. Thanks & Glad You're Enjoying. I Have 26 Chapters, So There Is A lot More To Come!(:

Amazinh