The Luck of The Irish - Comments, page 2

@be-a-star_TayTay33

glad I could help :)

@NiallsNandos

Thanks :) I rushed in the first scene because I was super tired and what I spent like an hour on didn't update and like disappeared :333

Thanks for your tips :)

well , your punctuation is good which I LOVE . I hate it when stories have bad grammar and punctuation . you have a good storyline also , to me , but it might lose interest for other readers so be sure to keep them on their toes ^.^ the chapters could be longer though , you could lose readers that way too . also , make sure to put more detail into it , and don't rush things . sorry if you get mad at me for this , but im just trying to help :)

Actually, Sasha Pieterse not Lucy Hale...

Sorry for any inconvience (//^-^//)

Hmm... I'm not sure. Should Zayn be taken by Marley or Perrie? I think I want Zayn to be taken. Cuz, Niall is sexy. But, I think I don't want to boys to have their real GFs. Comment below your name, age, reason you want to be that persons GF (Louis or Liam) and which celeb, actress, or site model you to be portrayed.

*Keep in mind the celeb has to have either been photoshopped or a picture of them together*

** Celebs that are taken: Ashley Benson & Lucy Hale **