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So good so far :)

Np

@Niall_atethe_username
Thanks I'm new to this so thank u

Hey some author to author advice not to sound rude or mean because your story is great but you should put a good amount of space between what each person is saying so it looks more like this

"my name is Niall" i said "so where are you going?" I said.

"im going to the Victoria secret show practice."Nicole said,

also use quotations when their speaking it makes it less confusing and lastly there are more ways to write he said or she said if u want some examples you can check out my story because just saying he said or she said can get a little boring love your story though its really good and i dont mean to be judgey really like the story :)