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@littlemissaudrey
I love your idea for the story and where it's headed. I just think you need to show us more of Michael so we can develop an opinion of him. Other than that, there are just a few grammar and spelling errors and a couple of run-on sentences that are pretty common and can very easily be fixed by just reading over your work again. Anyway, I do really like your stories :)
I love your idea for the story and where it's headed. I just think you need to show us more of Michael so we can develop an opinion of him. Other than that, there are just a few grammar and spelling errors and a couple of run-on sentences that are pretty common and can very easily be fixed by just reading over your work again. Anyway, I do really like your stories :)
11/12/13