Self Promoting...with no shame!

Hey ya'll!

I recently posted another chapter to my story "A Tale Of Two Spies", and I just need some honest constructive feedback on that story!

And don't worry! I will make sure to check out a story and help you out if needed too! Thanks in advance :)

-Denim °°

@JustBloo.
Ugh! Yes! Reading now x

@JustBloo.

Will check it out and I do need help with my story! :)
It's called "Perfect"

@tedzy
Thanks Tedz!

@Kady Hunt
Awesome! I'll start it right now :)

I've read it already and love, if you want to take it down its your choice but I really would love to see what happens with Zayn and Carter!

Maybe you could speed things up a little, just not too much, and put more flashbacks to why Carter behaves so... hidden?

@melancholy.

Thank you!

And that honestly helps a lot! I needed this comment so much! Thank you thank you thank you!!

I was debating on doing this as well but I backed out :P But I will give your story a go because the title is making me curious :P

@JustBloo.

i wish i had a story to self promote

@tedzy
Oh I'm sure you will soon lol :)


@Liampayneaddict
Thanks :) Anything I can check out for you?

@JustBloo.
I've got my Alternative Universe story Struggle. I'm really proud of that one and it has a sequel :D

could i get a 'lil somethin' on "our little cherry blossoms"?

@JustBloo.

eh.. no i do have some. i just need to transfer them to this account and actually freaking work on them :/

@Liampayneaddict
Kay! I'll check it out!

@melancholy.
Yeah of course! I actually read it and forgot to comment! I'll read read it though :)

@tedzy
Lol oohhh I love you :P You make me laugh lol

@JustBloo.
hey! don't laugh. i'm really trying hard here. my fingers even hurt from all the typing haha.