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Can someone read my story and give me feed back?

Homepage › Forums › One Direction › Can someone read my story and give me feed back?

I'm new to this sight, and I was just wondering if any people could read my story and give me some feedback?? My story's called; MY SISTERS BUCKET LIST

its.a.woderful.life its.a.woderful.life
1/19/15

sure :) I'd be happy too

Reagan_Grace_Evans Reagan_Grace_Evans
1/19/15

@Sawyer-Styles
Thank you :)

its.a.woderful.life its.a.woderful.life
1/19/15

I'm always looking for a good read so I'll definitely check out your story and leave a comment. If you have time, could you check out Ink?

littleafro littleafro
1/19/15

@kkgal14
Thank you. I'll check it out.

its.a.woderful.life its.a.woderful.life
1/19/15

@its.a.woderful.life
Cool, let me know what you think xx

littleafro littleafro
1/21/15

I' only on chapter 2, but I really love it. I really like that you made it seem like it was going to be a car crash and then it wasn't. I also liked your take on Harry, and how good he is a wuing parents, but is actually a total jerk. My favorite part is how much of a feminist she is.

its.a.woderful.life its.a.woderful.life
1/22/15

@its.a.woderful.life
It sounds like you're describing a completely different story because nothing like that happened in Ink so far...

littleafro littleafro
1/23/15