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Help? c:

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I've just started posting a Harry fanfic called Don't. I would greatly appreciate it if someone (or a few people) could help me figure out how to improve it from where it's at. Thank youXX

KissesXx KissesXx
12/5/14

I will if you still want help ? :)

Niallers Nandos Niallers Nandos
12/6/14

I will if you still want help ? :)

Niallers Nandos Niallers Nandos
12/6/14

I will if you still want help ? :)

Niallers Nandos Niallers Nandos
12/6/14

I will if you still want help ? :)

Niallers Nandos Niallers Nandos
12/6/14

I will if you still want help ? :)

Niallers Nandos Niallers Nandos
12/6/14

@Niallers Nandos
Yes please c:

KissesXx KissesXx
12/6/14

@KissesXx
I could help if you want? Like as another co author...? Let me know...

Liv_For_Payne Liv_For_Payne
12/6/14

@Liv_For_Payne
I'm sorry but I'm not sure if a co-author is what I'm looking for. I'm not used to working with people on stories.
I think I need someone to give constructive criticism more.
I'll keep it in mind though.

KissesXx KissesXx
12/6/14

@KissesXx
well, I could help with that? Like editing? not writing...

Liv_For_Payne Liv_For_Payne
12/7/14

@Liv_For_Payne
Wow, I just read the story and I love it :)


Niallers Nandos Niallers Nandos
12/7/14

@Liv_For_Payne
Wow, I just read the story and I love it :)


Niallers Nandos Niallers Nandos
12/7/14

@Liv_For_Payne
Wow, I just read the story and I love it :)


Niallers Nandos Niallers Nandos
12/7/14

@Niallers Nandos
Thank you! Can you think of any ways I could make how I'm writing better?

KissesXx KissesXx
12/7/14

@KissesXx
umm, let me think ?

Niallers Nandos Niallers Nandos
12/9/14