Reviews for beginners!

hey, lets be honest, your first chapter is all that really matters when you begin your story. is the first impression, its the decision maker for wether or not the reader wants to continue on. Since i have trouble determining my own stores, I'm willing to help other people so they can improve on their stores from the review of another person.

so heres the deal, I'm going to read your first chapter (preferably or a new story because a story with more chapters won't really need help but whatever you want to do) and give you a review of your most important chapter!

something you guys should be aware of is that I'm not a total grammar nazi but if i see that you have way to many grammatical errors I'm going to say something. I'm just going to review you mostly on your story line.

~no i will not subscribe to anyones stories
~yes i will rate your story (only if its a new story with one for two chapters because thats not so fair if i rate it if you ave more than a few chapters and I'm only reviewing one chapter)

if you want a review just comment or message me :)