Review???

Can someone please review my story "Change My Mind"??? And maybe even rate it??? Thanks my loves!!! ;)

Jasper_Renee_II
4/12/14

I'm happy to do it if you like (: x

M.SOPHIA
4/15/14

I'm happy to do it if you like (: x

M.SOPHIA
4/15/14

@It's Megan...
I would love it if you would review it sorry I don't get alerts when people comment on my topics! Thank you so much love!

Jasper_Renee_II
5/11/14

@Lindzeyluvs1D
Review:
Faults:
Pay more attention to details. Its good, but to make it great make sure to explain a little more. Like, where was she when she posting the tweet? What kind of phone did she have? (Please, don't say Iphone...its over used)
Another, grammar and punctuation.
There are too many sentences that seem to go on forever
Add more periods and commas, and all the other grammar marks needed.
Loves:
Nice plot! Good job on the characters.
Love the cover!!!
And can't wait to read more!!!